I finally got around to re-reading the words I typed in November. I fell far, far short of my goal, as work and the sudden addition of being run crew for a play to my workload upset my schedule. And that’s okay, really. I made it over half-way, and gotten further along with this story than I ever have with a non-script writing project.
Needless to say, the writing is excrement. And that’s okay. The plot has promise, but I don’t think that a novel was the proper form for this story. Reading through it, I have the makings of a really awesome anime series on my hands. A girl and boy trapped in a nightmare land looking for someone they both love? Very episodic paragraphs and events? DARK TORTURED SECRETS? Crap, I think I could make this series RIGHT now.
Characters are kind of ridiculous with pretensions of depth– I probably shouldn’t have been watching Ouran Host High School Club while I was writing. Lesson learned: shojo + SERIOUS literature = bad idea, at least when it comes to dialogue. Lesson learned, only watch stuff like Twelve Kingdoms when doing dialogue, at least in the absence of my usual writing buddies.
I did a better job of describing areas than I usually do– I’m not good at thinking spatially, so I tend to let room descriptions slide. But I did put an honest effort into descriptions, so points for effort.
Overall, I’m glad that I attempted to write a novel in a month. I took some writing risks I probably wouldn’t have done otherwise, did a LOT of writing on a single subject, and actually developed something similar to a plot. I don’t know if I will do anything else with the story I have written (It kind of finished around the 25000 word point, and I realized that I still had a lot more words to go), but I’m glad I have it around in case I ever need it.
Writing Quality- D
Characterization- B-
Taking Risks- A-
Dialogue- C
Overall Score- C+